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16th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2022




Farhad Varasteh

Title: Cohesion



Jurors Scores Critiques
Ann Alimi 7.5 Nice simplicity and empty area works well, however probably could use less empty space at the top.

Try cropping about half inch up there. This would draw the eye even more towards the structure.
   
Kerri-Jo Stewart 6 Interesting composition to emphasize the roof lines.

The image is slightly slanted though and would be stronger if the bottom line was horizontal.

The sky is plain. I would reshoot the image with more impressive light and something happening in the sky, especially the left side to balance the image.

A series of images with such tension as this exhibits from the tight roof line could be very powerful.
   
Leah Gray 6 An unusual image with compelling shapes. The sky takes a large proportion of the image, but is flat and uninteresting.

Consider adding some variation to the tones in the sky to better support the main subject. The small bird on the tower adds interest.
   
Total Score: 19.5
   

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