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10th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2016




Kaveh Rasouli

Title: Migrant



Jurors Scores Critiques
Kerri-Jo Stewart 7 Nice colours and strong composition. The wall detail is great but the upper half with the vase is soft. Either more focal contrast to make it the point or less. To have the entire image in detail would make it stronger.
   
Richard Shapka 7 Simple still life made interesting with some nice shadows, showing the wall texture Composition is made more interesting with the jug hanging on the wall.

Suggest the image-maker straighten the photo vertically (top of image a fraction to the left) so it is completely vertical, and clean up the left edge where the very small rail curve just comes into view. Use spot or clone tool to remove.
Not certain what the title implies.
   
Satya Danu 6 Regarding the title, where is the migrant? What is the migrant?

Nice pinkish warm colours. We see two triangles, each triangle filled with a different object. It’s a peaceful composition, and yet it is difficult to evaluate, because I can’t see something that leaves an impression on me.
   
Total Score: 20
   

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