The geometric shape is poorly presented. The subject could be placed in a more pleasing spot, without being cut off. Be careful about lighting and light leakage. Choose a different title.
Carol How
5
Interesting subject with unusual and tilted placement in the frame. The Placement creates visual tension. The red/brown background and the little hump at the bottom do not enhance this image, and give an impression that this not a well planned image, or that it was taken in a constraining environment where control by the maker was not possible.
Henry Schnell
8
Interesting shape well placed. Background color compliments the shape. Implied horizon not straight with top of shape not parallel to photo edge, making shape almost feel like it is tumbling.
