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11th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2017




Kaveh Rasouli

Title: Retirement



Jurors Scores Critiques
Larry Breitkreutz 6 Exposure is good in this image, and it is sharp throughout. However, it is very busy with many distracting elements. Not sure where to look. Some careful cropping might improve the image.
   
Allen Bargen 8 This image requires some concentration to determine what the message is, and we are not helped by the title. The colours and exposure are quite good.

One wonders why the bottom was cropped to remove a bit of the frame around the window. It would have been better to include it all.
   
Richard Shapka 7 Well scene shapes, and colors of the scene. Good focus with sufficient depth of field to show focus on window side of scene. Difficult on opposite side because of angle of view.

For improved composition, image should be straightened up on left side and bottom of window frame should be included to achieve balance.
Not certain what title indicates?
   
Total Score: 21
   

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