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9th Annual Photo Contest, Vancouver, Canada, 2015




Leyla Mohammadi

Title: Art on Wood



Jurors Scores Critiques
Wes Bergen 7 Overall exposure is good, although highlights are a bit too bright. The lower part of the image is sharp, but I’d prefer to see a little more depth of field. The composition is a bit static, and could have been improved by placing the main rib of the object at more of an angle.
   
Allen Bargen 6 Your message is clear. The challenge is for us to see it as most of the image is out of focus. This is likely a result of a long lens choice or a macro, both which would deliver this type of shallow depth of field.

There is quite a bit of distraction in the two top corners with the lighter coloured bits that compete with the main subject. Darken thee down in post.
   
Lynne Kelman 7 Creative depth of field---the viewer is left wishing there had been a little more depth and clarity and that the focus had been on the detail and texture and not the short depth---
   
Total Score: 20
   

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